A few of the SF stories I've read recently:
Boundary, and
Threshold, by Eric Flint and Ryk E. Spoor
I have had Eric Flint's work recommended to me for many
years so finally decided to try one. He mostly writes alternative histories,
his best known work being the 1632
series, in which a present-day US town is transported back to 17th
century Germany, but that kind of sub-sub genre of SFF doesn't much appeal to
me. In contrast, the plot summary of Boundary
(published 2006) caught my eye: palaeontology, alien remains from the time of
the dinosaurs, a voyage to Mars, ancient alien archaeology – that pushes enough
of my buttons to be intriguing, so I bought a copy.
I have to say that I was soon feeling some regret, as I was
initially not at all impressed by the writing style. The first chapter is
liberally stuffed with infodumps, with space devoted to biographies of the main
characters. Even emotions are described rather than displayed. The authors did
not seem to be fans of the "show, don't tell" philosophy. My personal
preference is to see an initial brief snapshot of the character, which is
gradually built up over the course of the story with reminders about their main
characteristics slipped in from time to time (especially if one reappears after
an absence of several chapters). Another feature of this story which I am more
than tired of is that almost all of the female characters are described as amazingly
attractive. Taking it all together, I was reminded of what I had disliked about
Jack McDevitt's early work.
However (as with McDevitt's books), the plot was interesting
enough to keep me reading, and the writing got much better (or at least, I
stopped noticing it). There is quite a lot of science involved, but it is not
too technical and all sounds convincing. The plot develops in all sorts of intriguing
directions and finally had me reading for several hours in order to find out
what happened. The conclusion is appropriate and satisfying, but I see that
there are several sequels so I might well try one or two more in this series.
Recommended: just ignore the writing style in the first chapter!
I was pleased enough with Boundary to order the sequel, Threshold.
When this eventually arrived (it took two attempts, the first disappeared
somewhere en route) I was faced with
an unusual problem. Although it was only a few months since I had read it, I
had completely forgotten what Boundary
was about. I had to spend an hour flipping through the book to refresh my
memory, and read the last 40 or so pages again. Once I was up to speed, however,
I got straight into Threshold. It is
just as well that I did this, as the authors get straight to the action without
any initial infodumps this time, although they helpfully include a list of
characters.
The internal chronology includes a gap of some months
between the two books, during which Earth governments have been absorbing the
dramatic discoveries at the end of the first volume. The sequel starts with
quite a lot of politics as responsibilities for the activities on Mars are
divided and alliances made, but then there's a dramatic development – evidence
found on Mars that there may be another ancient alien base on the asteriod
Ceres.
Unfortunately, despite their initial restraint the authors were
unable to resist working infodumps into the text, in the form of conversations
between characters consisting of long explanations for whatever is going on.
These are so wildly different from any real-world human discussions that it stretched
my tolerance to the limit, and when plot developments flagged up a major
international crisis on the way, I lost interest. It was the intriguing aliens
I was interested in, not the usual human skulduggery!
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Colony, by Ben Bova
Ben Bova is another of those authors whose name is familiar
but whose books I can't recall having read. It's certainly taken me a while to
catch up with Colony as it was first
published in 1978. This is relatively hard SF, being set in a not-so-distant
dystopian future in which Earth's environment gradually goes down the pan as
the population continues to increase, while the World Government (that is one
highly unlikely bit of utopianism!) fights political battles with giant
international corporations which are secretly supporting revolutionary groups in
the hope of weakening government authority.
The major corporations have already combined to create
Island One – a huge, hollow, artificial world in the form of a 20 km-long
cylinder which rotates on its axis to provide artificial gravity on the inner surface.
This is located in one of the Lagrange points between the Earth and the Moon,
is outside government control, and is populated by a select few. One
inhabitant, born and raised there, is David Adams; the son of a woman who died
in an accident while he was still in the womb, he had received the full
attention of the colony's geneticists who had tinkered with his genome to give
him every advantage. So he is highly intelligent, physically gifted, and immune
to all known diseases. He is also bored with being trapped in space, and
determined to travel to Earth to alert the government to the inevitability of
the catastrophe facing the planet if drastic action is not taken. Once there,
he finds himself unwillingly caught up in the revolutionary movement and most
of the book is concerned with his adventures and relationships as he develops
his thoughts about the future direction of civilisation's development.
This is a well-written and dramatic tale, with the time
taken to develop believable characters and relationships. I am not fond of
dystopias, having been depressed by quite enough of them, but I admired and
enjoyed this story.
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Acadie, by Dave Hutchinson
This novella is by the author of the Fractured Europe trilogy, reviewed here in February 2017. It is set
in the far future, written from the first-person viewpoint of a member of a
breakaway group which, centuries before, had left the Earth in search of the
freedom to develop their banned genetic modification programme. But Earth had
not accepted this, and kept pursuing them. The story starts with the
realisation that the hunters had found the group again, so they would have to
leave once more. So far, so straightforward, but there is a profound and
unexpected twist in the ending.
2 comments:
Try as I may I cannot get into Flint. That being said, Boundary did have excellent ideas, just couldn't get into it. I'll second the infodump comments. Look forward to Future posts!
Yes, I loved the ideas in Boundary, but wrapping them in a rather clunky writing style spoiled the opportunity.
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